[[well well, troubled waters]]

[deepintrospect]

no sooner had I thought I was out of the bad times in writing, but I've sunk back down. There's been so much going on lately it's hard to keep up. So I'm wading through, and the work I'm putting out otherwise just doesn't feel like it's up to par. Perhaps I'll settle down with some music, my computer, and just try to get out whatever's in my brain.

After all, Laura did help me piece together (and chart out) the introduction to chapter two. I can at least get that written for Thursday, although I'd like it much better if I got more work on chapter three done.

Comments

[lauramc.livejournal.com]

Yes, and you did very nice work on chapter 2. My comments were mostly tweaky, weren't they? Not big character questions, but questions regarding style? It didn't read like you'd slogged through the writing. (A good thing.)

I'm hoping you're working on chapter 3. (Don't you have pieces of this written and charted out, too?) I want to know what happens next.

If I'm remembering correctly, you could alternately or additionally work on chapter 4.

See you tomorrow.
Laura

[deepintrospect.livejournal.com]

I had hoped that it didn't seem like I was having a hard time writing it. I've been working on going over chapters 1 and 2 after I had read them aloud.

[kylerenaissance.livejournal.com]

I was just wondering how his chapter 3 coming? was also wondering if I could see Chapter 1 so I could get caught up on what I missed? by the way Chapter 2 was really good and I can't wait to see what the rest of the book looks like :)
Kyle W.